For the last few weeks we have been writing about about a video. First we had to plan our work on a normal describe map. Next we wrote a work on a describe ++ map which was way more complicated. Then we wrote our work on a google doc which was our first attempt and when we finished it we done our second attempt. Hope you like it.
My Star Explosion Writing
By Robbie
When a star explodes it means it is reaching the end of its life. It has four long stages, the first stage is a bright star that looks like a red fiery ball and that last stage is a big explosion which looks like a blackout.
First the star changes colours, the colours are orange and yellow. The flames are getting stronger and hotter. I think it is like that because the burning hot heat is trying to escape from the inner core. It also could be because it is getting hotter than a boiling pan. I wonder if stars are actually mini suns?
Next the star is getting mini magnificent blue explosions which look like volcanos blowing out blue lava. If it is blue it means it is the hottest part of the fire. I think it looks like that because it is getting ready to explode into one million pieces. It also might be the inner core getting stronger. It makes me wonder what it would look like from earth?
I see that the sides are bubbling like a broken dishwasher that is going crazy. It is quite hard to see the faint line of the star too because it is a bright blue flash which will probably blind you if you were right beside it. I think it is like that because it might be getting ready to explode. I also think it will stop bubbling until it explodes. It makes me wonder when it is going to explode into one million pieces?
Lastly the star is showing different shades of blue which means it is boiling hot and it will explode. Which means it is more than boiling hot, it is extremely hot because it is expanding. I think the star is like that because it is starting to disintegrate. It is also getting bigger because it is nearly exploded. This makes me wonder what the explosion looks like from earth?
Overall I think the star explosion is awesome because of all the stuff it does in the stages!
This is also the video we were working on too!
