This is my made up story which is based off a fairy tale that I have changed some parts of.
Make sure you comment below if you know what fairy tale it is and some feedback for me so I can improve my writing.
Once upon a time, there was a little boy named Greg who loved the outdoors. One day Greg got told by his mother to go deliver a basket to his Grandad and buy things on the way to put in the basket. Greg got given $50.00 dollars by his Mum to buy groceries for his Grandad. But we all knew that Greg was gonna spend it on something else.
So then Greg was off on an adventure he never thought was about to happen. He looked at Google Maps before he left and that guided Greg to Pak’n’save. While Greg was walking to the nearest Pak’n’save he saw one of his friends he had recently bet at a video game. Since this Jack had always been rude to Greg so when he saw Greg holding a basket and Jack said “Ohhh Greg’s gonna go get some flowers for his Grandad” In a very annoying voice, so Greg said to him “get it right next time Jack I’m actually getting food for my Grandad not like you at home playing Pubg all the time”. Then Jack said “at least I’m actually good at the game”, but Greg said, “what happened last time Jack”. This got Jack mad but he decided to walk away instead of hurting Greg with all of the people around.
Then finally Greg got into the supermarket and bought some basic groceries like Milk, Bread, Fruit and other things. The cost came up to $45.00 so what else did Greg buy with his money. So now that Greg has filled his Grandad’s basket he can go. But on the way he discovers a problem, the way he wanted to go has been blocked off by animal control because of a Wild animal on the loose. So then Greg thought about if he should go through his secret pathway that was recently closed because of construction. But Greg decided to go through the path, He didn’t know his problems ahead of him.
While Greg was walking through the path he came into a problem a Wolf ran in front of his path stopping Greg from getting to his Grandad. The wolf says “Hello there little boy you seem to look a bit lost, My name’s Desharn and I can help you find where you want to go”. Greg says “Hi Desharn, my names Greg but I don't need any help I’m fine”, Desharn was not happy Greg Said this, so he says “Ok Greg I will just be off then”. Greg says “bye Desharn”. While Greg is walking to his Grandad’s house he finds a tree with some berries and puts them in the basket too pay for his $5.00 that he spent on Lollies.
While Greg is picking the berries, Desharn the wolf takes his chance and runs past Greg to get to his Grandfather’s House. Desharn finally arrives there and knocks on the door and says I Grandad Shanix, Its Greg I’m here to give you some groceries. Then Shanix stands up and says I’m coming Darling. When Grandad Shanix opens the door the wolf eats him up and puts his clothes on and waits behind the door for Greg to come. When Greg finally comes to his Grandad’s house, Desharn (who is secretly dressed up as Grandad Shanix) is feeling a bit sick like he has something poking his inside’s. When Greg arrives the door is opened and Desharn is on the floor choking on something. Greg says “Grandad Shanix are you alright”, Then he spits out the real Grandad Shanix out who starts beating up Desharn but in the end, after Desharn has about a million bruises on him he runs away. After the end, Grandad Shanix is happy he got his Groceries and then Greg goes home to eat some lollies he bought and beat Jack at some Pubg.
